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Cherry ([personal profile] cherry) wrote2009-01-11 02:54 am
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Vid: Unsteady Ground (Merlin)



Title: Unsteady Ground
Fandom: Merlin
Music: Unsteady Ground - Catherine Feeny
Summary: Morgana can see the shape of things to come. (Morgana, Ensemble)

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Unsteady Ground
At night we plant bones
in the dark as you children sleep
you should know by now
there is always something moving
under your feet

Black water runs deep
underneath these titanic plates
where you build your homes
you tie up your safety nets

When these plates meet
it is mountains they make
yeah when these bones shift
there's an earthquake

Watch your step
you should keep your head down
you never know what tomorrow will bring around
hold onto what good fortune you have found
for you are walking on
unsteady ground

We will drill the earth
and you'll ride that slick
when it dirties your hands
it's a dirty trick

But it's like quicksand you know
to distinguish the top from the undertow
it gets harder
as your eyes and your bellies grow

Watch your step
you should keep your head down
you never know what tomorrow will bring around
hold onto what good fortune you have found
for you are walking on

You love God
yes, you love your president
you want them both
but we must keep them separate
the left hand don't know where the right hand is at yet
the children don't know yet that we're bombing Baghdad

Keep your head down
for we are walking on
we are all walking on


Notes: First of all, many thanks are extended to the always fantastic [livejournal.com profile] obsessive24 and [livejournal.com profile] elynross, for beta. Another round to [livejournal.com profile] wildmachinery, for audiencing and keeping me grounded.

As for notes related to the vid itself: When I was younger, despite being a voracious reader, I had trouble with Arthurian legend. I couldn't shake the foreknowledge of the tragedy awaiting everyone involved. Merlin is a fun show -- and as unfaithful as it may be to mythology and history, we as viewers already know how the story will end. It is something I can't shake myself. We have Morgana, who, as a seer, is likely beginning to see the shape of things that are to come. She's untrained, has little real knowledge of magic, and sees fragments of a future that must be horrifying.

This vid is my attempt to bring these characters and portents together, to look at some of the places where the cracks are already forming.

[identity profile] obsessive24.livejournal.com 2009-01-11 09:37 am (UTC)(link)
You posted it! *happy dance* I'm off to rec.
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[personal profile] such_heights 2009-01-11 10:04 am (UTC)(link)
Oh wow. This is fantastic. I love the clips and parallels and movement of it, I felt like I was seeing bits of the show in an entirely new way. *runs to rewatch*
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[personal profile] ender24 2009-01-11 12:52 pm (UTC)(link)
your vid breaks my heart in all places , but in a good way :)

and sorry, I am neither english nor american nor history anything, but anytime I see someone saying this "as unfaithful as it may be to mythology and history", I feel like an smartass pointing out to this meta essay, but somehow, I feel the urge to need to defend at least some honor of the people behind merlin *g*:
Negotiating the Boundaries of Legend, or, yes Merlin pays close attention to Arthurian Legend
http://icarusancalion.livejournal.com/824859.html?format=light

[identity profile] acari.livejournal.com 2009-01-11 01:32 pm (UTC)(link)
This is stunning work. I will have to watch it a couple more times to figure out all the different threads you are weaving, but that is so not a hardship.

I love it. Thanks for sharing.

[identity profile] winchesterjo.livejournal.com 2009-01-11 01:52 pm (UTC)(link)
That was a really beautiful video. The transitions between clips was absolutely flawlass, and good song choice for Morgana too ;D

[identity profile] tearful-eye.livejournal.com 2009-01-11 02:01 pm (UTC)(link)
oh wow, it's absolutely stunning. so beautiful!

i love this (like i love all of your vids), your editing, the music, everything just seems flows just so naturally... wow.
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[identity profile] shardsofblu.livejournal.com 2009-01-11 02:32 pm (UTC)(link)
You've definitely captured the inevitable darkness of the Arthurian legend here, and having it from Morgana's POV is just downright perfect. Knowing the future like that is a blessing and a curse all at once.

Again, great job!
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[personal profile] kathyh 2009-01-11 04:17 pm (UTC)(link)
This was stunningly beautiful. Loved the flow of movement between the clips and the echoes of darkness to come. Gorgeous work.

[identity profile] bradcpu.livejournal.com 2009-01-11 04:53 pm (UTC)(link)
The use of light and motion in this is just stunning, and the pacing is just brilliant. The emotion of it is very evocative and so consistent. Some incredibly effective use of time toggle and repeated clips throughout, and I absolutely love your sense of musicality.

[identity profile] missyvortexdv.livejournal.com 2009-01-11 05:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Really beautiful vid. Have downloaded for rewatching. :)

[identity profile] rae1013.livejournal.com 2009-01-11 05:14 pm (UTC)(link)
That was beautifully done. ♥

[identity profile] bionic.livejournal.com 2009-01-11 05:31 pm (UTC)(link)
that was beautiful!

[identity profile] bytheshoreline.livejournal.com 2009-01-11 05:37 pm (UTC)(link)
I have been waiting for someone to make a vid like this, and you blew my expectations out of the water. Seriously. There are so many levels to what you've made here, connections to be made. The end gave me chills. I am so saving this and putting it on my iPod :)

[identity profile] just-shai.livejournal.com 2009-01-11 06:34 pm (UTC)(link)
You always make such pretty things. Where is this show from? Canada? UK?

[identity profile] amchara.livejournal.com 2009-01-11 10:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Lovely vid- you wove together the hints of the future very well, and oh, it's kind of heartbreaking to see it all laid out like that.

[identity profile] revolutionaryjo.livejournal.com 2009-01-11 11:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, this is stunning. It gave me goosebumps and makes me all misty eyed. Absolutely the kind of vid I could watch over and over.

[identity profile] devohoneybee.livejournal.com 2009-01-12 12:02 am (UTC)(link)
Absolutely gorgeous vid. I like the show, am not smitten with it, but AM smitten with your vid and through that, the show, now. Hauntingly beautiful.

[identity profile] arefadedaway.livejournal.com 2009-01-12 05:12 am (UTC)(link)
This is just hauntingly, achingly beautiful, and stunningly put together; your flow is flawless and the evocative imagery you put to use here, like the parallels and the water, is complex and hypnotic. Absolutely the best Merlin vid I've seen to date.

[identity profile] hollywoodgrrl.livejournal.com 2009-01-12 07:13 pm (UTC)(link)
I can't begin to describe how delighted I am by this vid. It reminds me of why I really love this show, the sullen sadness, the feeling of foreboding, it's all there when you dig a little beneath the crack. You suddenly find yourself with pangs in your heart, watching these characters you so dearly love slowly destroy themselves as destiny has called. That is this vid. It feels very soft and feminine, like fingertips on flesh. It feels very Morgana and I adore that.

Another thing I can't help but flail about is the way you always manage to cut in some random clip of gorgeous motion, like at :04 and 1:24. And I love how you matched textures with the texture of the music at 2:08-2:18. All your "elemental shots" of grain and water and trees were phenomenal as well. I love it to pieces. Srs bsns Merlin vids are my weakness.

[identity profile] redbrunja.livejournal.com 2009-01-13 02:36 am (UTC)(link)
This vid was so delicious that I went and downloaded the first episode.

Morgana is unspeakably gorgeous, as a side note.

[identity profile] teabrewing.livejournal.com 2009-01-13 04:30 am (UTC)(link)
This is a gorgeous, gorgeous vid. I don't quite know what it is about the Merlin fandom that inspires such a bounty of vids in a relatively short time, but I'm glad it does.
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[personal profile] stellastars 2009-01-13 04:39 am (UTC)(link)
Here on a (well-deserved) rec! Truly lovely work! Absolutely stunning!

[identity profile] morgandawn.livejournal.com 2009-01-13 04:39 am (UTC)(link)
are you going to submit any of your vids this year to escapade? there won't be a Bascon convention this year and Escapade is looking for vids.
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[personal profile] copracat 2009-01-13 06:38 am (UTC)(link)
What a beautiful and sad vid.
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[personal profile] nutkin 2009-01-14 02:46 pm (UTC)(link)
I actually don't watch Merlin, but I followed a rec here and I have to say that this is just a really beautiful vid. It's not the kind of song I would automatically associate with this source, but it works seamlessly and really creates something moving and powerful. Great work!

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