eeeeeeeeeeeee! It's gorgeous! I love the changes you've made: the faster pace really works well, and I think your characterisation comes through even more clearly than it did in the first draft. It's an incredibly polished-looking thing, too--I can't believe it's your first vid. You so totally win.
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Date: 2006-12-07 04:16 pm (UTC)*claps hands over mouth, seekrit-like*
Many congrats on the scholarships!