I've actually gotten some writing done. Original stuff, LJ-Cut to save space and those of you who don't want to read it. I'm kind of jumpy about it because I'm not really used to writing original stuff. Which is something that I must work on.
So. Original spam. The first part of a larger story that I'm working on for creative writing. I'd just pass it through my teacher, but he tends to take two weeks to do a few simple edits, and I'm running short on time. I don't want a red pen or anything. Just if you happen to read it, if you could tell me if there are any major, glaring problems. It's still rough.
We now return you to your regularly scheduled programming.
( Ways of Living )
So. Original spam. The first part of a larger story that I'm working on for creative writing. I'd just pass it through my teacher, but he tends to take two weeks to do a few simple edits, and I'm running short on time. I don't want a red pen or anything. Just if you happen to read it, if you could tell me if there are any major, glaring problems. It's still rough.
We now return you to your regularly scheduled programming.
( Ways of Living )